I like the choppy language you have used. It almost jolts me, like a cow being hit would provide a jolt. Even though you have used the word 'beautiful' in your poem I don't picture a beautiful car. I picture a utilitarian object. I think it might have been a VW Rabbit. Good Haiku
I like the choppy language you have used. It almost jolts me, like a cow being hit would provide a jolt. Even though you have used the word 'beautiful' in your poem I don't picture a beautiful car. I picture a utilitarian object. I think it might have been a VW Rabbit.
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